Another Face In The Crowd Comments

What a rude fellow, what a motivated girl. I'm sure it's a repeat scene many many times over. Thanks for giving a window to view the life lived somewhere far away and exotic (at least to me, who will never be a world traveler) .

wow! A very contemporary take on mumbai's working women. Nicely done.

Vow! You have presented the story of the working Mom so well, so neatly. 10+++

A guy at work just mention to me that independent girls are the best but they are the hardest ones to get. Interesting thoughts, and some that we all go through.10++

This is a very meaningful write, Sandra! A lot of moms work to contribute something for the needs of their children, not everyone tho. She is somebody, Sandra, somebody who plays a very important role. This poem may be interpreted in many ways, but sure will caught some attentions. A must read! : -)

I have read quite a few of your pieces and have enjoyed everyone.

Sandra, Such a sad poem: (I guess real life if like that all the time. Wish poems were more cheerful. Great write though.

or maybe she's a poet and got inspired in the moment... and just had to get those words down....in any case, she can't be bothered! :)

this is a nice subject, a nice presentation from end to end, a well crafted piece. and some esp. women, can relate to this.This is great.

this is nicely written. and the tale is one that many share.. good poem! ! !

This is an exceptionally good poem, Sandra, one that holds the reader's total attention from beginning to end. Your descrptive language was outstanding, as was your phrasing, too. Your words painted a vivid scene of the modern workplace without glossing over the unpleasantries or unwanted attentions of opportunists. The clarity of your writing made this a very memorable poem. Carl.

very nice..ina contemporary setting involving tangible...here to touich chracters you painted it very well...tenner And like a phantom She vanishes into the crowd ...a lament shared by me and so many of my colleagues....I for one admit cheers

a man furious on a woman for not having his time. good verse.

it's said Time and Tide wait for no man...and for no woman too particularly in this fast moving world! ... a good theme well conceived and beautifully brought out...10

modern working woman has no time to say hello to herself, where is the time for unsolicited attention. sad, at times I wonder are woman more happy today, following their dreams... the title says it all thought provoking write 10

Wonderful Sandra. You have beautiful way of telling things, in a telling way...................very very good poem.............stunning......(I want to sy more)

This is very much the fate of the unknown citizens...in the world...we have lost our identity, we ddon't know why we engage in a rat race for money, fame, ....a universal theme well expressed indeed///10+++

Another wonderful write on the state of things in modern times...10+++

She should be a young mother. your obervation and galloping words all merit the poem. marks 10

Date & Time: 5/16/2009 8: 33: 00 AM Remove this comment Poem: 17413693 - # Another face in the crowd Member: Marieta Maglas Comment: It's a true poem of the human condition in which the woman became wife and mother. She is so much attention and involved in her new life, that she no longer sees anything around.I like your style.