Monday, June 11, 2007

Another Empty Soul Comments

Rating: 5.0

I find myself on a slippery slope,
heading for a bottomless pit.
My heart has given up,
on what it longed for.
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David Harris
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Ernestine Northover 12 June 2007

You will have me in tears soon David. I felt as if I was descending the page, getting sadder and sadder. Very well expressed, getting quite depressed. Very deep feelings here. Love Ernestine XXX

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Ah, who could not relate to this? However.. I am so glad I know it isn't true. And I promise always to sing your praises. :) t xx

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JoAnn McGrath 11 June 2007

Your soul may seem empty to you...but here is all you have to do....just look at all these friendly loving notes.....from the hearts of many spoke....we'll all keep you afloat: O)

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Marci Made 11 June 2007

Sounds yet again at the end of your day, as it was in the beginning, dark, sad, alone...If I could hug you all the way across the sea, I would but since I am not able to do that, please CYSH......love, marci.xo

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 11 June 2007

Another dark poem David... of lost hope and dreams...10

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David Harris

Bradfield, England
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