Monday, January 4, 2016

Another Dream Comments

Rating: 4.5

Imagine that, little house on the
hill with black shutters, white picket
fence and green lawn. A tree in the front
yard grows thick over windows. Imagine
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Ben Partenay
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Kim Barney 04 January 2016

A fascinating poem. My favorite part: I'm lying on the lawn, the brown lawn, looking up at a cloud shaped like an eye. I am small and cold and the little house is long gone.

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 January 2016

In words! But, dreams are part of life. Thanks for sharing.

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