Another Dimension Comments
In another dimension
Still on my own feet
But somewhere in mind
Deeper at heart
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Because everything is not forever ____________________________ My favorite line. A very passionate poem, and full of longing. Enjoyed!
Wonderful work, Soul. That third stanza has a particular and profound impact. I think it is right at that point when we have that urge to cleanse the heart is when we have indeed grown up, and yet are right at that the stage in life when a rebirth becomes very possible. Great verse, Soul.
Wow this makes me tink of time travel and the refrain of another dimension that I mention in creative phrasing is very appealing n dreamy in a poetic way. The wish to be reborn expressed well and many wish it. Pls do review my latest poem too called poetry commentary.....
This world is moving, now at brisk pace towards war and hatred and when we look back not very far, just to our childhood days - No mobiles, no I-phone, no gadgets, no Internet - not even telephone lines, the world was a peaceful place, early morning walk with school bag on back, fragrance of flowers in the air, birds chirping all around, those school bells... everything makes nostalgic yet when we look ahead, we see many things missing, clouds of war, division of people and their beautiful mind overloaded with many futile thoughts......A thought provoking poem.. Soul...Loved it 10+++
Dear soul, Dream for regaining the innocence lost is something out of ration. How we can expect to rejoin the purity that once a time we had been granted with freely? Actually it is human contumacious behaviour that made him to be ostracized from land of serenity and returning to that Eden of peace seems something out of hallucination and illusion. Our rebellious act toward our fate, our covetous nature to gain higher position, our insubordination to majesty of all powers all in all draw such portray from human being, ourcasted CREATURES from heaven that once they were harbored in it.
Dear, the poem that I created here is not a direct meaning that I want and can be innocent like when I was a baby, but it is expression of how our life slowly changed to be different as we born that way... I dont punish people by their wrongdoing if they commited once, because we do mistakes everyday but to give them a way to try improve themselves is necessary. I dont expect people to be back like when they were younger, but to tell and remind about us.. Im not lamenting dear over this, my expression is different than you so maybe it may confused you... Im still not materialistic person n I dont live in a war or such conditions but how we could improve life thats what I want to see. As an artist I know its not easy to make a canvas back to be pure white again after we began our work on it, but we can beautify to -forgive- mistakes that we did. Life is that too, to repent and be kinder is always welcome... God is Most Merciful anf Most forgiving dear so why we still need to keep bad forever while we have time to make it better. Thank you sweetie for your time reading it and commenting this. Our mind could be different but as opinions they are mingle each other to discuss. Take care :)
new poem. nice. nice is the title, because another dimension is very attractive to me. when I read, I feel, there is no another dimension.... He gave us no such power, as He once dreamed and we have this universe.. nice poem dear, I tell you something from my heart, in this game show on Earth, everyone is innocent. one who harms another, he is doing very wrong to himself. (is it right! or books are wrong)
I love this poem as you reveal so much of yourself through beautiful words, lines and imagery. To go back and taste the sweetness of childhood to feast in the innocence and the joy for every moment. To have peace and not even realise it, because to be grown up is to see the terrible problems of the world helpless as the power is out of our hands! The longing for when the world was about what game next as we play with our friends and serenity was a reality not just a dream! Brilliant write!
Really wonderful poem and so nice to read. Sometimes it's good to try and escape into our dreams as this earthly dimension isn't always a nice place to be.
Dimensions of life are changing at every moment and we are to be survived within the same. A great emotion has been depicted in your visual write. +10
A wonderful longing for another dimension. A real one but a dimension where our unchanging soul can reign without fear without a need for approval, just pure soul carrying the innocence of early childhood. Beautiful poem, my friend, you manage to carry the reader there. A great ten
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7/19/2025 10:56:09 AM # 1.0.0
Where is my innocence gone Please back to me And make me breathing new again In the world of peace and serenity Or forever i lost in this dream.......this is the essence of the poem any one agree with. Indeed it is a marvelous creation in your pen. Thanks for sharing this gem.