Another Day Without You Comments

i like to write about missing someone, too...and i can verily relate with the emotion in the poem. truly, sometimes, i feel that what i have been doing with my life-like working like a dog and trying to focus on something i am passionate about, like hip hop dancing and writing poetry-they all kina sorta like fade ebcause she isn't there to share those things with me. aaaaargh! you just made my heart bleed. lol!

good poem of the first day of the year, , , , , , , , , , , , , good writing

Your feelings are expressed very well in this write, wonderfully done.. Scott