Saturday, March 25, 2006

Another Day Today Comments

Rating: 5.0

I saw her by the bus stop
and she glanced my way
she gave me such a pretty smile
it took my breath away
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Charles M Moore
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Esther Leclerc 05 May 2006

Ah, the sad hands of fate and lack of will, together... That feeling you describe to me is like the inverse of deja' vu... it grips you so that you never forget.

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Duncan Wyllie 31 March 2006

Another magnificent poem filled with lifes breif incounters that seem to mean so much.A real heartstring puller and another great piece of work from you Charles.Love Duncan

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Anna Russell 27 March 2006

Poignant and beautiful. Reminds me a little of the song 'Do I Ever Cross Your Mind? ' Hugs Anna xxx

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Linda Ori 25 March 2006

How many chances do we miss by being afraid to just speak? I think we can all identify with the feeling. The only things we regret in life are the chances we didn't take. Great poem, Charlie, as always.......... Linda

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Ruth Warren 25 March 2006

thank you, you made me smile, with this poem

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Patricia Gale 25 March 2006

Take and grasp the moment for you never now when it shall befall you again. Lovely write Charles Patricia

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Charles M Moore

Charles M Moore

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