Tuesday, September 16, 2008

Another Day Of Today Comments

Rating: 5.0

I squeezed the lemon but it hit me in the left eye
Didn’t sting, just cleansed my perceptions for awhile
At least for a moment before the rage cleared
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Kathleen West 16 September 2008

Great write! I really liked the beginning too. It has the feel of the beginning of a good book, leaves you looking for what happens next.

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