Thursday, April 24, 2014

Another Day Of Loving Her Comments

Rating: 5.0

Don’t need a reason why it happens so
Around me sparkle thousand stars
I beam in the happiness’ radiant glow
For having another day of loving her!
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Yash Shinde 26 April 2014

Loving 'her' makes life beautiful, day by day, like a waxing moon, love grows........... A cute short, love-filled and heartfelt write.............

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Tajudeen Shah 24 April 2014

a wonderful teen-soul versification! reminds me of a series of those days that faded off and trampled by the chariot wheels of time, still feebly sobbing in the wet sod of soul, beseeching moksha. for me such a wonderful reminder your lines acted. God Bless. thank you very much. wonderfully young. (pls see if you kindly fly a few miles with 'memory birds' and evaluate how they behave.

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