Saturday, September 13, 2008

Another Day Closer To Truth Comments

Rating: 4.4

Don't fear that truth you hide,
it escapes your weary clutches as you slumber.
Face tomorrow with certainty,
it holds secrets of longing yet discovered.
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*Trusting You* 09 June 2009

very true... we should always face the truth that way we are not hiding and covering everything up. good job. Becca

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Anjali Sinha 12 May 2009

If only I had that much courage to face the truth lovely poem-10 anjali (do read mine My Mother)

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Koyel Mitra 27 September 2008

This is an excellent poem.A 10!

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Lily Law 24 September 2008

i wished that i will have the courage to face it.. lovely piece.. ^-^

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Treatise on moving on; being marooned on a bruised ego can scare life out of death

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Who Iam 17 September 2008

To your friend or anyone that has been in this situation may it give them strength to escape the abusiveness of someone who claims to love them! Imagery is well done, clear and to the point. Well done my friend! Like the others a ten from me..

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Tom Balch 16 September 2008

Like me Stella will love this piece 10+ regards Tom

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Kesav Easwaran 15 September 2008

Words closest to truth...inspiring piece, Viola...your friend will gain a lot of strength reading...10

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Now this is JUST the poem a girl needs to wake up to.... and cute of you to write it for your friend. t x

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Wow talk about a reality bite.Good poem thanks.

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Kris Smith 14 September 2008

A friend indeed you are, hope it all goes well

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Emancipation Planz 13 September 2008

Stellar effort for your mate... hugs.. twas a lambikini day up here...

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Saint Cynosure 13 September 2008

Hey let me be the first to give you high marks...10

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