Thursday, July 10, 2008

Another Day Awakens Comments

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Another day awakens
Shade my eyes, laden with unshed tears
Against the harsh glare
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Anita Atina
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Richard Blanch 14 July 2008

Botyth down to earth and lyrical: I love tha 'a' sounds so plangently used. And the use of stolen with light....healing gently catches all we can hope for. Thank you again.

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Stone Granite 13 July 2008

Yet every dawn brings precisely what you question - just look for it where it can be found - within you.

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