Another Day, Another Lie Comments

hannah! ! ! ! ! hi its becka..ii really really really wanna be a part of your poem club...after what Beth said about me being a journalist last night....anyway i'm kinda stuck & i don't know where to began so if u could help me come up with a topic that would be great! thnx♥ ♥

I really enjoyed this beautiful peace. The repition gives it a nice flow. ~Lacey~

i like it! its good. some people can relate to that!

That 'another Day, Another Lie' is a really great poem! I love how you tied in some parts about Jesus! I do hope you keep writing poems like that and put Jesus in some of the poems!