Sunday, July 20, 2008

Another Day, Another Lie Comments

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Another day, another lie
Another time to pretend to fly
Someday I'll tell them what I really feel
I'll tell them that happiness isn't real
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Becka Mull 28 August 2008

hannah! ! ! ! ! hi its becka..ii really really really wanna be a part of your poem club...after what Beth said about me being a journalist last night....anyway i'm kinda stuck & i don't know where to began so if u could help me come up with a topic that would be great! thnx♥ ♥

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Lacey Unknown 31 July 2008

I really enjoyed this beautiful peace. The repition gives it a nice flow. ~Lacey~

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Rachael Settle 28 July 2008

i like it! its good. some people can relate to that!

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Hannah Martin 22 July 2008

That 'another Day, Another Lie' is a really great poem! I love how you tied in some parts about Jesus! I do hope you keep writing poems like that and put Jesus in some of the poems!

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