Tuesday, July 17, 2012

Another Day, Another Adventure Comments

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another day, another adventure! started off writing
in one direction, and then turned like a wave with
a mind of its own... i never know, and rarely plan...
the more i look for beauty, the more simple raw
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Swetha Vanakayalapati 18 July 2012

the realization of oneself in others and accepting their worst...and only share the best even in broken times...... i acknowledge with your ways.....another day...another adventure....another broken life....we fall but never forget raise after many times we are cursed to fall..! ! KUDOS! !

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Well, personally & literarilly speaking...this was a'ell of a productive turn...and a nice change of pace, in showcasing your diverse-a-verse literary reperetoire....Rhyming Poetry to modern free-verse...and now Prosaic Verse...Very well done iz'all I can say! ~FjR~

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