Monday, May 24, 2010

Another Day Comments

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looking in the mirror, brusies everywhere
look at what you done to me
dont you feel bad for beating up your own daughter?
shakeing from fear, gasping for air
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robin machorro
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Ellery Lim 05 June 2010

i love the title. questionably, there was no mention of weeping or tears. great job though. thoughts and feelings have been conveyed.

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Iron Panda 23™ 26 May 2010

=(sooo sad

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Jason Medina 25 May 2010

wow, this is really emotional

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