Monday, September 28, 2009

Another Day Comments

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Another day, another month
They come and go so swiftly
I blink and then turn the page
And the seconds race right by
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Fiona Davidson
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Adeline Foster 09 December 2011

Good write here. Read mine - Boomerang - Adeline

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Barbara Terry 03 June 2010

OMG Fi, you know I can not only relate to this word for word, but I can identify with everything you said here. It is what I said in so many other words, when I was 12 years old. That was over 40 years ago. I am very happy to see it finally put into words that others can see. There was always one more tear to join the river that I had cried already. Thank you very much for sharing this. A 10+++++ Love & hugs, Barbara

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Steven Fearnley 26 October 2009

A well observed and cleansing poem with a with two great last lines.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 12 October 2009

STRENGTH SHOWS IN YHIS LOVELY UPLIFTING POEM...THANKS

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maggie murray 09 October 2009

Strength comes from lifes adventures It lifts us from the grief of this world Uplifting words Fi......Maggie

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Georgia Girl 07 October 2009

I agree with Stephen, great write...we gotta get out there and make it happen..10

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Stephen Stirk 07 October 2009

Loved the poem Fiona. The last two lines are so apt and put everything within into perspective. Best Steve

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Sue Sie 29 September 2009

Taking these steps forward are huge for you...A gentle, thoughtful poem...x Sue

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