Tuesday, August 26, 2008

Another Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

Everyday is another day I have to pretend.
I have to put on a smile knowing the nightmare wont end.
Everyday is another day I block out the world.
Faking a laugh and hanging with the girls.
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Salu Salu 05 January 2009

a monotous day followed by another monotonus day........so goes the cycle. pg wodehouse ' a rumour a day keeps the depression away ' while writing his prisoner stories........ we make our days special entirely different from the other..is it possible? yes to some extent....at least while reading we are experiencing something new......am I right.... wow...there is a good poet in you. thanks for sharing./salu

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Marilyn Lott 09 September 2008

This sounds like a child with lots of heavy problems. Hopefully they will all work out for her as childhood can be very difficult. Keep writing, Kyla, you're definitely on the right track. A 10! Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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