Thursday, August 7, 2008

Another Day Comments

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As another day of my life comes slowly to an end, I pray for God's mercy to wake another day and start all over again. For tomorrow is not promised and who knows what lies ahead, as I struggle to keep living with unanswered questions, why is my little brother dead? I know he's watching over me and wants me to be strong, but I can't help but wonder what could have gone wrong.
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Kerrie Owens 04 May 2009

What an excellent poem. Is it true? Can i just say im so sorry if it is. But you're an excellent poet and im sure your brother is looking down on you and proud of his sister. Once again, fantastic poem. Kerrie xxx

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Wilmore.G Hingert 07 August 2008

Your poem is really Cool. i wonder where did you got these ideas of expressing your sadness. It one of the best poems i had ever read. I hope you write more good poems. W.G.Hingert

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Ahmad Tarmizi 07 August 2008

PLEASE READ MY POEMS....AND IF U S'DAT HAVE THE CHANCE TO COME TO MALAYSIA PLS CALL ME 017-3821440

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