Sunday, June 22, 2008

Another Day Comments

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You heard me through another day
so few are the times I remember to pray
You may have needed another ark
for tears that rained in those hours so dark
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Tia Maria
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Emily Oldham 27 October 2008

lovely poem, very optimistic and interesting. thanks Athena *** words will change the world ***

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Adam Day 02 October 2008

wonderful is all i can say

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Ashraful Musaddeq 12 September 2008

Optimism is the essence, a very good composition.

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Rani Turton 03 September 2008

There is a definite message in this poem, and it is that of hope. Very uplifting.

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Tanya Stanford 15 August 2008

I love the hopeful messages you send through you poetry. Your writing technique and rhyme and correct use of words is brilliant. Thank you for sharing.

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Natasha Dementia 28 June 2008

This poem is so touching, words gentle and soft, speaks out loud and clear. Nice peice

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