The sun is finally shining, warming my skin,
The horses are poking their heads out of the barn,
The snow has lifted, revealing green grass,
The ground still frozen, ice still on the pond,
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A lovely write. Sounds like a 'pert near perfect' start to a new day. Well done. Richard
Oh wow what a beautiful life. Very beautiful piece. Excellent..
You have done great here love, it is as if we all set there with you, experiencing everything together...
very beautiful poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! keep up the good work.
start of a very good day indeed! poem so fragrant so sweet...and so relishing especially in the kitchen backdrop...good work, Becca...10
has any one said to u that u r the master of description and imagery?
Always another day to view the beautifull and amazing world we live in
wow...nice imagery...instills a sense of beauty in the readers...! ! ! : D
This is another good poem u wrote I love it! ! ! Of course u are a great writer don't ever forget that MERRY CHRISTMAS! ! ! !
This poem was so beautiful, I love how your descriptions make me invision the whole scene in my mind. Truely beautiful...
I pluck a flower out of the cold ground, The sweet innocents of the little pink thing makes me smile, Twirling in my fingers ever so gently, really dear the poem is full of feelings which we face always but cant imazine how beautiful is that..... really you are superb thanks
Sometimes life becomes stagnants at certain place and point but then another day starts and life moves on....
Bursting with beauty. Awakening the senses with a profound gentleness. Well writtin 10/10 for me.