Another Day Comments

How easy it is to stay 'in the land of nod', especially in this poem Ernestine when things are not as they should be in your day. Perfect rhythm, rhyme and flow. Beautiful.....10 Karin Anderson

This is such a beautiful poem, I share your hurt. Andrew x

A fantastic piece, the rhyme, the flow and the use of the first line all make this a readers delight. Outstanding!

Redundant can be acrid to a poem...But not here, young lady...no, no, no! This work is smooth & flows like a dove feather in flight....The repitition of the one line to introduce each stanza....A W E S O M E...As is th' works craft, overall... Another fine Penning from our Poetess E.! ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; fJr

This is a very tender piece Ernestine. The repeat of the first line on each stanza, works brilliantly and give the narrative an affirming andd reaffirming feel. As you know, I am a sucker for well presented rhyme and this is very much that. A very loving poem.

Oh this pulls at the heart Ernestine and is said with such feeling, Thankyou for this great piece A gem as usual Love duncan X

This has a fine flow to it Ernestine. I like the repetition of the first line and the 'classical' feel to the text. Maybe you could try 'tis instead of it's in line three. Just a thought? A wistful, touching poem. love Allie. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Oh wow that was beautiful. ~Dawn