Saturday, November 11, 2023

Another Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

So it's wake time again
When eyes are still droopy
Not with sleep but with
An invisible weight on the lashes
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Nosheen Irfan
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Kingsley Egbukole 14 November 2023

Beautiful poem, well captured

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 14 November 2023

I get that way all the time Noshy this was brilliant TFS Bravo!

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Anjandev Roy 14 November 2023

Through the day if not night..... brilliant..

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Bill Cantrell 11 November 2023

We all have invisible weights that we lighten with various means, very nice poetry

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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