Another Day Comments

Keeping your head above water will let you see a new path instead of becoming overwhelmed. Really good write. A 10.

It is a beautiful philosophical poem having touching expression and brilliant theme. The structure of the poem is nice too. Thanks for sharing.10

The poem is not perfectly shaped because life's not perfect. As the scientists have figured, the earth wobbles and could lose its rhythmic roll around the sun. What happens then? Do we need to worry? No, it's just another day to keep on living.