Thursday, November 15, 2012

Another Day Comments

Rating: 4.5

She walks the halls in sheer anger.
She breaks the lockers in half,
She goes into the bathroom and cuts herself
Drip, Drip, Drip goes the blood,
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Scarlett Outlaw
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Rigzin Namgyal 08 October 2013

..that is the sad reality that many among us have gone through while growing up..bullies in schools, colleges and universities..many couldn't take it after a limit was crossed..and nothing has changed..bullies continue to exist.. ..a touching poem..

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Sally Plumb Plumb 22 November 2012

I understood this when I was sixteen... I feel much better now I'm 72.

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Tammie Aimson 19 November 2012

very good but very sad. i know the feeling. i have been there myself but i have 2 great friends who stop me going to far. i am proud to say of what i do as its not easy to forget and to blame someone else other than yourself. very good again. x tamara lil-aimo

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Anthony Han 17 November 2012

There is no other way that makes us feel like such aside from society. The tag-along pressures that come with it are devious. Good write!

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Brandon Mcconnell 16 November 2012

very sad.. if only people in these circumstances would come out with the truth

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Hazel Durham 15 November 2012

The sad reality of the terrible harm and destruction bullies cause in everyday life that effects families and scars those left behind. Great write!

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Asif Andalib 15 November 2012

A really touching and heart-felt write. I am in an aweful situation for a long time but I know someday my sorrows will be over. Patience is the key to success for the wise. However it's a hard fact there's many people who commit suicide. So I like it

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Lyn Paul 15 November 2012

If only the right person was there to listen, there are ways out of these situations, the torture of those left behind is unbearable. Thank you for sharing these words Scar

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