Friday, January 3, 2014

Another Count Comments

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Moments by moments like beads
On a string drop down, another count
Is complete, a sapling sprouts from a seed
Into a young plant soon it grows
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Yasmin Khan
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Muhammad Ali 05 January 2014

another count. the game is progressing. nice flowing poem.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 04 January 2014

string drops down to spill the bead...Good..then the sprouts from a seed to fulfill the duty of the cyclic process..the imagination flares up.Thank you for sharing..Happy New Year..

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Valsa George 04 January 2014

Time slips by and years fall off like beads from a string or leaves from a tree to be repaced by new ones! A new Year has dawned! Hope it will herald a new spring! Enjoyed! !

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Anil Kumar Panda 03 January 2014

everyone of us is entangled in the cycle of life.use of nice metaphor....loved it.

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