Thursday, November 10, 2022

Another Christmas Comments

Rating: 4.8

The adverts have now started of
Christmas cheer, of being together
Sitting by a slow burning log fire,
A Christmas tree and all that glitters
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David Wood
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MAHTAB BANGALEE 13 November 2022

Christmas Day is the day of gratefulness to God that He sent us a great Savior; So, I think we shall be grateful to God and pray to Him either alone or together it's a choice of self interest; nice to read your poetic gist about Christmas Day

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Anjandev Roy 12 November 2022

Justly beautiful.........thanks for sharing....

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Bri Edwards 11 November 2022

I give 4 stars. I have at least two poems with Christmas themes: one about a rat named Jake, and another about Christmas cards. And anais vionet has one with a masks-at-Christmas theme. bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 11 November 2022

(cont.) It might be if now-aging-and- tired Cupid Put his glasses on, and perfected his aim. This Christmas, like last, will be the same.

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Bri Edwards 11 November 2022

part 1 of revision: Adverts aside, I'll spend my Christmas going for a walk or taking the bike for a run. I wish Christmas for me was fun! ! (contl)

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Bri Edwards 11 November 2022

I had 'trouble' with the wording of stanza 4. I'd like to suggest a revision: (cont.)

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Sandra Feldman 11 November 2022

Nothing is a celebration when you're alone. You ave staged this sad consideration so vividly and beautifully in a Xmas celebration descriptio w

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Jayne Louise Davies 11 November 2022

Love this David x Christmas isn't all its cracked up to be. Too much commercialisation. They tend to forget the true meaning of Christmas x Thank you for sharing!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 11 November 2022

Even though, I am with family I feel alone too

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Cowboy Ron Williams 10 November 2022

It's no fun being alone at Christmas... or any other time, for that matter.

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