Another Child Moves On Comments

nice insight..... great flow.... good write

beautiful. full of self expression and things that are a truth that most choose not to face. very creative. very good, i liked it more then i like most poems.

Beau: This is a very well written poem, excellent structure and smooth rythem. I like it and so will others that read it. I must give you a ten. Your friend in Poetry Lynn

Great work. It's really good 10/10

Good comparisons used here Beau - - and there is repetition for emphysis which adds to the hidden message of the piece..... a meaningful write....10 from Fay

this is a great poem! its true and its right.. so its great<3 Much Love, Samantha Lynn<3

Splendid, deep thought in this piece, well done!