Monday, June 1, 2009

Another Chance? Comments

Rating: 3.5

So many things happened before
Hurt, lies, and betrayal
When you walked out of my life through that door
I thought, 'How can I prevail? '.
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karamia smith
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Eyan Desir 10 June 2009

Awww, all i hope he dont break your heart

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Sameer Ahmed 10 June 2009

In case of love, a second chance should be given for it can seep through the heart of the one who betrayed you before and can make him or her melt so softly that the same love and feelings for eachother can have a rebirth but with more intensity this time.........10

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Lady Grace 05 June 2009

this poem is expressing deep thought..should you give her/him another chance? ..well, think twice before everything..grace

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Toni Bellanger 04 June 2009

Something we can all relate to, love never leaving us. Sad, and maybe just a little hopeful.

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