Saturday, May 5, 2018

Another Chance Comments

Rating: 5.0

if all of a sudden I come across you in the street of gariahat,
crossing the road to the other side,
where I was waiting! after twenty-five years!
I would probably gaze and gaze,
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 November 2022

this is not the same village-street where we could run without any boundaries.....touching expression, A magnificent piece of poetry!

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Unnikrishnan E S 18 August 2019

Hi Malabika, Loved this poem for the way you presented the story of love.. “This is not the place we played together “, a single line telling us a lot more.The places have changed, the time have passed, the characters have grown in age or wisdom or both. But their love remains unchanged.. On to MyPoemList, so that I do come back for a re

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A thought provoking poem beautifully crafted and well executed. A vivid portrayal of the intricacies of love and life. A great piece.10

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Hello Rose Marie, thanks for your inspiring comments! And a great rating!

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