Another Beginning Comments

a good poem...love, in its sublime form, is pure devotion...well written, Sadiq...10

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Do read mine Happy Birthday dearest Mother anju

sadiq, wat a beautiful poem with nice comparisons-- but if I may say something-- I am a hindu by birth and have a great devotion to Mother Mary- so I would not like any comparison of humans with her. This hurt my sentiments a little bit. Dont take offence-I just voiced my thought-- otherwise you are a great poet and your sequels to Resh's are as good as hers are to yours. regards anju ++++10

this is a lovely poem.needs to be reread, i can't pin point, but i felt there is a kind of serenity and devotion in your poem.loved it10

Lovely feeling told in mellowed tone........good