Monday, August 4, 2008

Anorexia Comments

Rating: 5.0

You're with me everywhere that I go
You tell me you’re my friend
You slowly kill me everyday
But I try to pretend
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Payyton Egerstaffer
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Chris Newlash 25 November 2009

this is grea.t awesome ending.

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thiws is good poetry my dear friend........ good job kicking it to the curb.

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Serenity Prayer 05 August 2008

exellent job, Payyton! ! excellent! wonderful write, easy flow and a happy ending to a sad story. great job! ! !

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Payyton Egerstaffer

Payyton Egerstaffer

Fort Polk, Louisiana
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