Friday, September 7, 2012

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The phone rings who is it
Nobody
the door swings open…
Nobody
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Snow Maiden
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R.k Das 12 September 2012

yes, , it is 'anonymous' :)

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Dove Allen 11 September 2012

No is a powerful word! It can describe intent or lack of. Shifting the subject of no from an impersonal the within the first stanza, to a reflection of oneself in I in the second stanza, adds a dimension to this short poem that names the elusive element of anonymous; which is love hoped for but yet realized. Short but conveys strong images we have all have experienced at some point in our lives. I really like this poem!

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Cherret Leakey 07 September 2012

I wonder what inspired you write on ths topic, anonymous. I wl be waitng 4 your explanation, dear.

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Leslie Philibert 07 September 2012

Good write, but I did miss the question mark in the first line...

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