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Eyes of the dead
lashes veiled...

tongues now silent
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Afzal Shauq
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Rosa Banks 29 November 2009

well it dose show how hard out leaders are trying to be but were not perfect and the are trying to keep order in the world so this poem is ok i mean i think it was just words rhyming and saying how much you hate the order our leaders have set but hey thats just me!

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Kayla Lines 22 July 2009

this poem describes the opression of a dictatorship, from what i have found this powerful poem simply describes what the dictators of our world are truly doing not what they say they are doing.

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~ Jon London ~ 05 July 2009

Lovely expressed piece....you continue to amaze me with your ability to create such magically touched writes......wonderful to read my friend

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