Announcement Of Darling Before Christmas Comments

Another beautiful piece,

An enjoyable read with some nice pacing and visual imagery. You tell a tale well and the poem provides the background. Good write.

A sweet symphony throughout the poem/ well-written

This porm is very profound with such metaphor in this story. Great poem. Keep it up :)

so soft n beautiful..........like a wounded, wild bird.........these line is so effective.. great!

) +your sea colour eyes+ en extremely sweet poem))) a nice one))) BUT where is Christmas?))) Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ))))))))

Wonderful poem, such a complex symphony in hearts to green land of mind. I like the way you deliver and point a poetic gesture here, it so softly written, more to touch inside readers' heart..Keep writing, seems like you have more time to write now_Unwritten Soul

A really great poem. Enjoyed reading it. A good write.

The poem is so beautiful, one understand what you're saying, but cannot really describe the depth of meaning. And I guess that's what poetry is about, the feeling of pondering over words written by someone else. Trying to capture the true essence of spirit. Great piece, Ahmed.