Forty years of bliss and non bliss how do
you ever try to marinate all the non harmony
moments, to tenderize its foundation
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this is truly a beautiful poem.. i am mesmerized.. u are AMAZING! ! ! bravo
What a great loving tribute to the one you love on an anniversary. I like to put on a tough facade or exterrior, but beneath it all, that is how i feel 'bout my wife of six years. I guess i'm a mushy romantic at heart. Don't tell anyone, though! I hadda giv'vit a tenner though. God bless all poets and readers alike-MJG.
What a wonderful Anniversary message Bonnie. thank you for sharing with us your tender devotion. A fine example of enduring love. Greetings and best wishes from Fay.
Bonnie, The consistency & range of this lovely piece, & how you solidified it all makes for a timeless poetic read ... beautiful! Best to you always, Robert
Tom is a very lucky man! Indeed a woman's love is the most powerful force, and Bonnie didn't you convey it well. Forty years...Damn. Makes my twenty five seem like an engagement. Loved this piece as always. Best regards, Craig.
Very sweet and deeply touching work Bonnie, you truly write from the heart. Love, Andrew x
…touching sonnet on the 40th anniversary of your love… wielding the power of your pen and the overflowing feelings of your heart.. The sweet sour memories of togetherness are written, On the paper roll of heart with a golden pen; The bitter sweet momentary ego’s fight, Never overtook insatiable love’s delight; The clamoring memories of the love of yore, Assure me your love will shines once more.
How wonderful to be so much in love. Beautiful poem. Sincerely, Connie Webb
A delightful message of love and affection.....and the efforts necessary to make a relationship work. Congratulations.....and....Happy Anniversary.....to you both!
This left me speechless! for i must do as you have done to teach myself and my sons how the love of life is won i am just one of but a pair, i heed your tender word in prose i pass on to my children those tender word I've heard regards Bob
Bonnie, this is a great tribute to the love of your husband and the many years you to have shared. Congratulations on your anniversary. Lynn