Tuesday, June 29, 2010

Anniversary Of A Break-Up Comments

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I know how you felt
I saw a sword piercing your soul
Blood oozing from the wound
When I said ‘it's all over'
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Deepthi Vincent
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Marium George 28 January 2012

Someday when my crying's done I'm gonna wear a smile and walk in the sun I may be a fool But till then, darling, you'll never see me complain I'll do my crying in the rain From Aha's crying in the rain

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 27 July 2010

‘wait for the sunny days To see the happy, carefree you again To leave behind all hard feelings Walk the same roads together, once more’ ~ started with gosh ended with posh lolol You’ve compelled readers till last stanza ...where the florid smiling blooming lushing blushing L :) O :) V :) E :) unfolded and manifested …excellent poem……… thanks for sharing … Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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