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Congrats for the anniversary of submitting your poems, with a nice poem like this.
With fantastic attraction I see, this one you have done Thanks for sharing For expressing this meaning, .....
Congratulations, Mahtab on your first anniversary in this powerful poetry site. You have submitted powerful and beautiful poems. Poem Hunter is blessed by your presence. A remarkable poem well crafted.
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With poetic expression you have found love and this love has motivated you to write. An excellent poem is shared.10
Crossing seven seas! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Congratulation for completing first successful year with us. Indeed you added value to this PH site with your fantastic poems. Keep writing for ever and ever, with all my best wishes.
A nice poem to celebrate the anniversary of submitting poems. Liked its style.
Mahtab, maine Urdu mein kahe Qata Taarikh zarroor padhe hain, angrezi mein pahali baar.
I am happy to learn that you joined Poem Hunter on 15th January,2018. In a short span, you have made remarkable developments with significant literary contribution to this great poetry site! Wish you sparkling literary journey days ahead!
For the first time I've seen Fibonacci series being literally used in a poem. But one thing, it becomes unwieldy soon with the number of syllables going up. I recall some see Fibonacci connection in sonnet style as well, and accordingly they feel sonnets should have an octave of eight lines and in place of a sestet, a five line stanza wherein a Volta starts somewhere. Hence a true sonnet they feel should have 13 lines, not fourteen. A novel idea and congrats Mahtab Bangalee.
Nicely elevated 'I' up above the base line.... Stay blessed.... PC