Tuesday, January 15, 2019

Anniversary Day Of Submitting Comments

Rating: 3.7

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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Pallab Chaudhury 29 January 2019

Nicely elevated 'I' up above the base line.... Stay blessed.... PC

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Khalida Bano Ali 25 January 2019

Congrats for the anniversary of submitting your poems, with a nice poem like this.

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Muzahidul Reza 25 January 2019

With fantastic attraction I see, this one you have done Thanks for sharing For expressing this meaning, .....

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 January 2019

Congratulations, Mahtab on your first anniversary in this powerful poetry site. You have submitted powerful and beautiful poems. Poem Hunter is blessed by your presence. A remarkable poem well crafted.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 21 January 2019

congratulashones happppeeee celeeebrashones for all ur lovoleeee compooosseeeshones MB BECOME MBA SOONLY \OF SHININGLY POEETREE

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 January 2019

With poetic expression you have found love and this love has motivated you to write. An excellent poem is shared.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 January 2019

Crossing seven seas! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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M Asim Nehal 17 January 2019

Congratulation for completing first successful year with us. Indeed you added value to this PH site with your fantastic poems. Keep writing for ever and ever, with all my best wishes.

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Akhtar Jawad 17 January 2019

A nice poem to celebrate the anniversary of submitting poems. Liked its style.

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Ravinder Soni 16 January 2019

Mahtab, maine Urdu mein kahe Qata Taarikh zarroor padhe hain, angrezi mein pahali baar.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 January 2019

I am happy to learn that you joined Poem Hunter on 15th January,2018. In a short span, you have made remarkable developments with significant literary contribution to this great poetry site! Wish you sparkling literary journey days ahead!

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 January 2019

For the first time I've seen Fibonacci series being literally used in a poem. But one thing, it becomes unwieldy soon with the number of syllables going up. I recall some see Fibonacci connection in sonnet style as well, and accordingly they feel sonnets should have an octave of eight lines and in place of a sestet, a five line stanza wherein a Volta starts somewhere. Hence a true sonnet they feel should have 13 lines, not fourteen. A novel idea and congrats Mahtab Bangalee.

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Kostas Lagos 16 January 2019

Celebrating with a fine poem! Great work

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