Anniversary Comments

I shall nobly as you desired Always you teased and work admired Who knew you will leave and get expired? Your work may lead me and thoughts aspired I shall continue to thrive Your spirit will live and revive I shall make it livelier than life Prove to be honest and dedicated wife we have to face this situation one day or the other, The departure of loved one is apprehending, and painful

Yes; that indeed is God's inscrutable ways one has to accept! Pl. read my AFTER DEATH WHAT? in the PH.

All the poem is very beautifully written and very clear to understand

was dumbfounded and could not cry Asked repeatedly for what crime and why? .....10

I shall continue to thrive Your spirit will live and revive I shall make it livelier than life Prove to be honest and dedicated wife Beautiful lines written from heart directly!

dear am back again how are you these times well this is also so very interesting and nice poem too well done dear luwi

shall continue to thrive Your spirit will live and revive I shall make it livelier than life Prove to be honest and dedicated wife Its good self-other reflective poem byou being a man I would say... thanks for sharing. 5/9/09

Memories live beyond the grave. A very wonderful poem, Touching and heartfelt Hashmukji. Angel

a poem sad and poigant. well composed.thanx for sharing a 10+++ fro me surya

was dumbfounded and could not cry Asked repeatedly for what crime and why? ......10

beautiful rhymes on a sad note...lovely sir....10

It reminded me years of marriage Life passed easily with simple carriage...reminds us of our long association.....10

The poem leaves an indelible imprint in the mind. The pang of separation of the the spouse is very difficult, specially if it is a sudden occurence As I have always expressed Hasmukh, your rhyming is very good.

Nice thoughts with sincerity

a brilliant and deep tribute in verse.10/10

I shall continue to thrive Your spirit will live and revive I shall make it livelier than life Prove to be honest and dedicated wife the ideas here inputed amazing! chosen words are fine! 10+

this is so nice....i liked the last stanza...and sure the whole poem...meaningfull and creative...great work :)

Very well written poem. Filled with excellent Ideas. Love to read it

a great poem, very well expressed, nice rhymes, thank you for sharing.................10

Every year it will come and take me off I may not cry but can not hold bluff........10