Tuesday, July 22, 2008

Anniversary Comments

Rating: 4.8

Ten years dead
But the rain still hurts.

Ten years dead
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Mpheng Magome
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Bill Thomas 31 July 2008

Excellent work, Trixie - lovely twist at the end, too.

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Nkululeko Mdudu 31 July 2008

wow! I'll say that's a very good poem there, ten years dead yet still breathing I see.

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Greenwolfe 1962 22 July 2008

This is real good. Very creative. I love this thing because of the ending. We have a writer here with a lively mind. GW62

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