Annihilation Comments

The lines support the title and theme very well, and the writing seems quite skillfully done...

Hmmm... another good one. What I respect here is the tautness of phrase, the concision. I think many poets on POEMHUNTER can learn a thing or two from your compressed lines and unsentimental approach. By any chance, do you enjoy reading Sylvia Plath?

A mystery that radically evolved Helplessly waiting while good is disolved Creating cruelty with every chance Destruction by force just to enhance .... we must try to build and not to destroy anything good.... it is not good quality....10 read mine watched helplessly.... real neighbour

very impressive way of thinking... way of dealing with life... nice philisophy... brilliant.

Wow! wont say much, simply fantastic.

Another powerful and thought provoking piece Deborah, great work. Best wishes, Andrew

revolving and evolving at the same time, , , , , you have captured the human nature and tendencies and the related outcomes beautifully..........

life is an endless battle of struggles yours is a poem which made me introspect lovely write -10 anjali

I really like this one. So many clashes and battles we have to fight everyday. Good Job! :)

I am commenting because you asked us to comment on your poems so you could have a lot of hits. I hope you reach your goal - not that a lot of hits really means anything, but you asked.

I thought it was good too. It rhymed a bit like my poem but I thought it was better than mine. It had more substance in it I think. Gandy

Very powerful and indepth piece. Your words share such insight and leaves a frightening feeling of what is to come.

Wow. This poems possesses an excellent flowing structure while the intellectually stimulating vocabulary brings forth a great theme. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem.