Annihilation Comments

Fantastic imagery................compelling and well written

wonderful cadence! the rhyme flows beautifully.

Absolutely brilliant poem Valerie and so true.

Great poem. Certainly reflects the nihilism I feel constantly in my own consciousness and I see unstoppably marching into all of man as a social being. The path towards annihilation seems set and inescapable now.

A well written and very truthful account of our current conditions, humans have indeed become the earth's parasite.....

A well written verse of so bleak a view, let's hope it's essence we don't eschew, while in contemplation I have a brew and try to sort the situation. Time to think of our impending annihilation while all the nihilists are on vacation, as they won't mind our inconsideration and we can think without the added aggravation. A provocative and finely write to motivate even entrenched procrastinators alright.

You never cease to amaze me... yet again your poetry is stunning!

So stark reminder of what is to come. A wake up call if nothing else. I'm giving you a ten.

So close now. A very nice write Valerie. Thankyou. Regards..Sharon.

I can so relate to that... nice one...