Monday, February 25, 2008

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boat stave ribs and thin jutting hips
a cacophony of defiled desire
heaving through pretty pale blooming lips
she writhes alone on the funeral pyre
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Katelyn Hinman
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Vidyadhar ... 03 March 2008

rhyme, rhythm good imagery nice poem

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