For one so full of sorrow and war-
I think I should have been born in Russia during
a dynasty of tyranny that brought to it’s people a great depression.
It would make more sense because then I could explain why I feel so cold, most of the time-
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Beautiful, beautiful. Oh for an excuse for anomaly. A touching poem from two touching souls. Fondest Regards
Beautiful, beautiful. Oh for an excuse for anomaly. A touching poem from two touching souls. Fondest Regards
Amberlee, your poetic maturity is absolutely astonishing! You end your poems brilliantly!
Dear Amberlee, I can relate all too easily to the feelings of alienation you so deliciously depict herein this finely crafted, well thought out piece. High marks from me. GWG
what a poem Amberlee.. a lot of people are more willing to judge than understand and that is quite a sad, but I wouldn't bother with them. They are not worth it! Take care HBH
Somewhat similar to my thought process. Absolutely stunning work. I was that poor child who wore shoes with holes in them and my mother's clothing. I love your style. Thanks, Amanda
This is simply an amazing poem even though it is full of sorrow. If it makes you feel any better, you are one of the most inspiring Americans I have ever known! Glad to see you posting again. Best wishes, Seán
very powerful! I especially liked the smack of the ending. Although not an American, I understand the narrator perfectl-a credit to your writing skills!
If you are reading Anna Akhmatova, you are way ahead of the game, my girl. :)
This is painful beauty of the soul! Anna Akhmatova is with you! ! !
Seem like we could be twins. No one understands my words sometimes. Joe