Monday, June 28, 2021

Animosity Comments

Rating: 4.2

People never talk about
The animosity they carry
In their souls for someone
They won't even examine
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Aarzoo Mehek
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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 June 2021

You have put spotlight on animosity people that needs to be thoroughly examined...a thoughtful write...top score!

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The poem is a strong criticism on the animosity carried in people's hearts without being noticed.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 June 2021

This poem says it all: God is noticing and giving them time! A very insightful poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 June 2021

They never voice the contempt they carry To annihilate someone's tranquility They forget above all there is God Who is noticing and giving them time to amend the vindictive wicked characters?

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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 June 2021

People never talk about the animosity they carry In their souls for someone.They won't even examine Their conspiring plotting qualities

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Chinedu Dike 28 June 2021

Well articuated and nicely brought forth with insight...

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John Shea 28 June 2021

Beautiful.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 28 June 2021

A Strong superb poem against animosity. You expressed that swell. Kudos. Plz do read and comment my newest poem titled, ' the value of oxygen and life'

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