Friday, April 7, 2006

Animals In People Comments

Rating: 4.0

Children in the playground playing on the swings being like a monkey. As the monkey is swinging in and out of the trees as the wind pass him by.

Baby in the pram sleeping quietly a bit like a mouse. As the mouse is sneaking quietly past the hopeful looking cat that is looking on for coming mice.
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fanniesson - 27 September 2006

the ending I liked never thought of ending a poem of mine with a question good idea enjoyed the read here

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Kee Thampi 07 April 2006

Baby in the pram sleeping quietly a bit like a mouse. As the mouse is sneaking quietly past the hopeful looking cat that is looking on for coming mice. this is a nice story in poem. new writing, experimental, I wish success in this new venture

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