Thursday, June 23, 2005

Animals In Clothes Comments

Rating: 3.6

Animals in clothes I see
Driving cars or sipping tea
Animals in clothes I see
But they don't know what they are
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Egal Bohen
COMMENTS
A. Madhavan 04 December 2015

Good to see a change from the romantic to the satiric and modern suburbia. Humour and parody, but with a deep self-questioning within. Retrospection leads to introspection,

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Kate Lechoe 04 December 2015

Nice poem. We surely need to be differentiated from animals.

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 December 2015

We do sin but, animals do not. Nice work.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 04 December 2015

Amazing write. Enjoyed reading and agree that self realization has become a bach bencher in the glam-up world. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Anil Kumar Panda 04 December 2015

Style of writing is sweet. Nice reading.

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Leah Scott 18 November 2013

I liked this but it was a little too repetitive

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Chris Mendros 08 January 2008

well, you bring up a very interesting point here (licks self, then scratches...)

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Ben Gieske 30 December 2007

Very effective writing. I vote a 10 for all the poems I have read. This reminds me of my visit to the Cincinnati zoo. They had installed a mirror in one of the exhibitions and when visitors looked into it, the inscription reminded them that they were animals too.

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Blue angel Florida 20 August 2007

lol So Amazing, funny still dark as for TRUTH is all it calls from behind bringing out our dust. AMAZING! ! ! ! THANKS AGAIN! ! ! ! ! You seem to be so PURE!

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Ana Monnar 19 August 2007

Great poem! I enjoyed it very much.

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Nermin Nazim 28 September 2006

very cleverly said, the truth, why deny it, yes Mr. Doggy or Mrs Piggy would be the same if they could dress like us or talk. Stupid that dont realize that. beautifully said my dear. loved it.

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David Gerardino 22 October 2005

GREAT POEM, at first i thought a little to long, then i thought, no its perfect the way it is.

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Gillian.E. Shaw 05 July 2005

Absolutely marvelous! Cleverly crafted!

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