Sunday, November 6, 2005

Animal/Fear Comments

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The musty smell
hangs
weightless in the air.
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sal carter
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Scarlett Treat 28 March 2006

Musty smell hanging weightless in the air conveys a very real fear. This whole poem has a very Stephen King feel to it! Good writing, but, like Michael S., I want you to correctly spell mundanity.

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Laura Cummings 11 November 2005

OHMYGOD! ! ! ! This is brilliant! ! ! ! WOW!

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Michael Shepherd 08 November 2005

This one held me. Excellent, imho. (mundanity?)

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sal carter

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