Saturday, November 15, 2008

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Rating: 5.0

The drenching tears of a swollen heart
that will one day burst,
The Doomed that hope theirs will not break
Are the ones that face the worst.
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Charmaine Sinclair
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Indira Renganathan 04 February 2009

Very touching....can feel your heart..10

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C. P. Sharma 28 November 2008

A feelingly written poem with good imagery and aliteration. Enjoyed it.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 16 November 2008

when what left of life goes out from bone-dry haunted eyes...wondwerfu imagery by the life...eloquently versed with unique style of ingenuity, and simplicity, well done,10+, thanks for sharing

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