Angry Storms Comments

a beautifully economical work of truth and art. john

Like boats Shaken by angry storms We twist And break each other Still Stay alive Drawn together In heaven’s smile After the agony of angry storms there is always a state of tranquillity. A bit symbolic but beautiful poem with deep meanings. 'May be' is the key to enter the world of poetic suspicion, the beauty of this poem. Economy of verbiage is another quality of this poem. Nice one, Martine. Best Wishes Naseer

a nice piece....always remember dear, after the storm, sun still shine..naizz

very nice poem, i like it

i like its simplicity it works so well - 10

Nice, short and touchy. 10+

a wonderful poem. thanks sharing. Kolitha

Beautiful imagery here Martine… an excellent write!