WHAT WILL ANGRY NATURE DO
WHEN
THWACKS OF DEBRIS
SLIDING MIGHTY GLACIERS
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Akram, you write for cause, keep writing before mans greed destroys all that is beautiful. He cannot see the beauty, he cannot see the crime he commits. Well written piece. Bob
A cool tune Akram.Peace be with us all and may it silence the guns.Living in tolerance and recognising each mans dignity and right to persue his God in his own way has to be a code for life. Sid.
U r right priests mullahs nd nuns are praying but without effect.. Coz its we ppl responsible for it.. When we completely surrender ourselves to the nature then the day ll come when its spreads love instead of anger.. By the way xclnt writing..10/10... Thanks for sharing.. *Smile4ever*
'amuck' is one word, not two hay doesn't grow (it's dead) otherwise, very nice work sir
Angry nature as angry poet too.......You are shouting your nature poem here, anyway......Powerful composition written with great metaphors.10+++
Luminous poem with amazing metaphor and deep in sense. I love it...10.
Yes Nature is revolting against its abuse by humanity in general...very good write Akram, but if I may suggest the impact would have been better had you not used large caps for the poem.10
An awesome song. When Nature is red in tooth and claw Its dreadful death dance has no flaw CP
The earth yes shes the perfect mistress of the universe shes being abused a lot by us humans I think she revolts sometimes and shows her anger dont u think so? and yes she has a right to do the same lovely write dear akram -10 anjali
the deeds of sense goes along with, more to say is only giving you my optimistic congrats for taking efforts, having the rival that nature express to us. maybe this talent of yours it goes with blood stream. for now i would like to hear, read it from published poetry book. GREAT-INSPIRING WRITING
angry nature..she has the right to fight against spoiling her air, waters and shores, with all the means the human declare a war against the beautiful nature.. a wondering and pondering thoughts very well put, was able to say what the angry weepy nature said..10++++
a deep discription for painting the nature with an anger...... well done man. u could simply discribe an angry nature with words of wisdom. (WHY THE MAN POKED NOSE INSTEAD OF FOUNTAINS RISE SMOKE COOL BREEZE DOES NOT BLOW) a stanza line indeed..... once again Akram you got another great piece of urs....... good day to you.