Tuesday, March 24, 2009

Angry At You! Comments

Rating: 2.8

My eyes feel so heavy,
from a distinct lack of sleep,
i get in bed lay as still as a corpse,
then i feel my eyes begin to weep,
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Emma Jane Rae
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Akram Awadat 30 March 2009

very nice poem, fantastic lines

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Gabriel Joel 24 March 2009

Very awesomely witten Quite the poem!

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Rosalita Fernandez 24 March 2009

Anger very prominant! nicely written well done!

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