Thursday, July 1, 2010

Angry At The World Comments

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I ORIGINALLY WROTE THIS POEM IN 5TH GRADE AS A JOURNAL ENTRY. IT IS REVISED AND ALSO WHEN I WROTE THIS, I REALLY DID FEEL THIS WAY. THIS POEM IS DEDICATED TO ALL THE PEOPLE IN THE WORLD WHO ARE SUICIDAL\DEPRESSED. DEPRESSION IS not SOMETHING ANYONE SHOULD TAKE LIGHTLY. FEEL BETTER SOON.

Anger at the world…anger at the world
Nobody but me understands me
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Elena Sandu 11 April 2011

I have no words to describe the pain I feel.. You are one of the lucky ones to get over those hard moments but yes there are too many people who feel just like that or worse and the number grows everyday. What moist my eyes is the truth of our world's child: A child who thinks sharper than the adults..Children now have it too fast, too much information canned in their brains. The brain is ok but the heart cracks because it also needs as much love and care. Hearts needs to have contact with other hearts then only parents but nowadays kids have no true warmly beating hearts near by, but only tv, internet and games..Could they ask forgiveness and forgive those cold 'friends'? Thank you for share,10

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Anger at the world…anger at the world Nobody but me understands me Even my closest friends have never heard a word of my self hatred... only self will know abt the fact.. nice poem...10

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Darrin Mcmiller Jr. 07 July 2010

'When you come across me you’d never begin to think/I have low self-esteem and dream about endless possibilities...that will never come true' Favorite lines 'And be me, totally and completely ME, for once in my life' Best line Absolutely ice cold, brilliant and all as a 5th grade student.

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